[Re-Usable] Green Valley zone v1

[Fox_Fan]

Fox_Fan submitted a new addon:

Green Valley zone - Bonus level for SRB2

This is my very first addon that I published on the SRB2 forum. It is also one of my first maps for SRB2.

Green Valley Zone
is a Green Hills styled bonus level for SRB2 created by me.​

I strongly ask you to leave a review of my addon, pointing out my mistakes and helping me improve my map-building skills. I will be grateful to anyone who points out all the flaws here (I am sure there are some).

Here are also a couple of screenshots:

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[Soniku11]

Hello! that's a nice map you have here.
Visually its really amazing and beautiful, and i honestly feel jealous of you, i gotta be real..

But theres a few issues that must be fixed to have a smoother and consistent gameplay flow.

All of the floating platforms are much too thin and they share the exact shade as the background, meaning they blend too easily, so its easy to miss them unless you stop and observe carefully.

Make them Thicker, and give them a texture that will highlight a bit more and wont blend with the background

Same goes for the tunnel over here, where its hard to notice at first there's safe and solid floor that you can touch, since one would naturally just jump across the cliffs and onto the other platform since you really cant' see that the cave's waterfall is where youre meant to go.

And maybe its just me, but this current is far too slow for how far the death pit is.
If you're gonna make an unavoidable death when falling onto the river, at least make the current far stronger, because it feels like a huge waste of time having to wait for over 10 seconds being dragged around till you actually die

Besides these issues, youve made an incredible job here, and i hope you keep improving!